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The charmers can be cool and calculating.  They often seem to provide a small boat that may not carry anyone far, more appeal than substance many times!  Good poem for thought.

posted by mariss9 on June 29, 2013 at 7:43 AM | link to this | reply

Please tell Kabu, that she would Jay. Isn't she the little rabbit.

posted by C_C_T on June 28, 2013 at 11:37 PM | link to this | reply

Great poem...

posted by MsJudy on June 28, 2013 at 7:04 PM | link to this | reply

well tell CCT that I find the poem very sensual.......

posted by Kabu on June 28, 2013 at 2:42 PM | link to this | reply

Jimmy

But it is empty and waiting for someone, like her heart.

posted by UtahJay on June 28, 2013 at 2:16 PM | link to this | reply

Interesting . . . sometimes what one wants and what one gets can be in conflict with each other. And that pic is somewhat confusing. Either that boat is very, very small, or those lily pads are enormous!

posted by JimmyA on June 28, 2013 at 1:59 PM | link to this | reply

Relationships are a lot like being out at sea...

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 28, 2013 at 12:08 PM | link to this | reply

Goodness he would frighten me Jay , I will be interested to read what the ladies think.

posted by C_C_T on June 28, 2013 at 12:02 PM | link to this | reply

You have quite a way about you with your poems.
Good work.

posted by TAPS. on June 28, 2013 at 11:20 AM | link to this | reply