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You capture the stress felt after this event well in this poem...A very powerful poem.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 17, 2013 at 6:09 PM | link to this | reply

(If I am reading this right) you might have been killed too if the shooter was armed and dangerous.  I would not resent someone saving themselves if I was going and they were unable to help; I would want them to get help and stay alive to identify my killer.  It wasn't your fault times turned so bad and you were swept away with them. 

posted by mariss9 on June 17, 2013 at 3:07 PM | link to this | reply

yes I agree very powerful poetry that contains horrors from

another time and place. The life of the addict seems to be surreal and only later some things best forgot come screaming to the fore. Much to ponder on here.

posted by Kabu on June 17, 2013 at 2:32 PM | link to this | reply

Utah

Very, very powerful...I get a sense of enduring pain...

posted by Nautikos on June 17, 2013 at 2:07 PM | link to this | reply