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You could try cocoon Jay I am a lousy speller. I really like this though
posted by
C_C_T
on June 16, 2013 at 1:05 AM
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It sounds intense and disturbing. I am glad a butterfly could emerge and something better could come about. God Bless. 
posted by
mariss9
on June 15, 2013 at 10:50 PM
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UtahJ
This is one of the travesties in life. I think some of those who live through this become the strongest, most nurturing and good people. Be blessed my friend. 
posted by
Justi
on June 15, 2013 at 7:18 PM
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That is how I see death too dear Jay.
posted by
Kabu
on June 15, 2013 at 7:09 PM
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You do a great job at building the tension in this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 15, 2013 at 6:32 PM
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