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Good effort for this quite difficult work Jay
posted by
C_C_T
on June 10, 2013 at 8:24 AM
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I like how you introduce each stanza with a question and then each line evokes different imagery...well done!
posted by
Annicita
on June 9, 2013 at 8:13 PM
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very good. and the wind makes our wind chimes play at night
usually bringing a blizzard and I love it.
posted by
Kabu
on June 9, 2013 at 6:25 PM
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A powerful question you ask at the end of each stanza there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 9, 2013 at 3:46 PM
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I heard it through your words!
posted by
Troosha
on June 9, 2013 at 11:49 AM
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