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Very powerful, Jay!
Children, babies, toddlers slaughtered by war and occupation is a fact the masses bury in a deep, dark hole and try to cover or fill in with mindless visual nothingness...I've been trying to write a poem today about the very young killed by drone strikes; have a collection of similar work on the subject of the forgotten ones...You write so hauntingly and vividly in this vein (as you do many others too) and I hope people read and think about what is done in their names...
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Katray2
on May 29, 2013 at 11:47 PM
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Jay...
You make us stop and think with your poetry, and that's always a good thing...some very real sarcasm here, tough and convicting, too.
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posted by
Rumor
on May 29, 2013 at 6:34 PM
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UtahJay
mFor myself I hope for the world to see clearly Jay. BC-A, Bill’s R®st 
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BC-A
on May 29, 2013 at 5:26 PM
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UtahJay
You surely bring out the world as you see it Jay
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 29, 2013 at 4:46 PM
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i wish you would flip the bottom to the top and top to the bottom....wonderful imagery utah even if sad
posted by
Annicita
on May 29, 2013 at 4:35 PM
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the world is not always a pretty place. Not everything that happens is
Lolypops and candy. Write it as you see. Poetry should make a person feel something. And I personally find little laugh about when i look at the world which is actually looking back at us.
posted by
Kabu
on May 29, 2013 at 3:37 PM
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No not all things are nice Jay. Sometimes we have to pretend they are or we would go starkers.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 29, 2013 at 11:47 AM
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You do a great job at touching the reader's heart, Jay.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 29, 2013 at 9:52 AM
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