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You definitely have your own way with poetry,
and I, for one, like it a lot.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 22, 2013 at 7:36 PM
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Jay...
A very well-written, thought provoking poem that some will like and others won't...but such is life..
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posted by
Rumor
on May 22, 2013 at 9:56 AM
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Love it Jay!!!
posted by
Kabu
on May 22, 2013 at 9:54 AM
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A fine selection as the title poem...The old, brown dog really sticks out to me.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 22, 2013 at 9:41 AM
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Jay it would have been perfect if you could adopt such a dog.Very good The title poem will appeal to some I am sure. Now do you feel any satisfaction after writing the book?
posted by
C_C_T
on May 22, 2013 at 8:09 AM
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I love the poem, and it conveys what you mean very well. I DON'T like the thought of a poor, old doggie alone.....
posted by
adnohr
on May 22, 2013 at 8:01 AM
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Powerfully done, Jay! I could feel the sad yet determined steps of that dog
Such imagery! 
And I think that is a wonderful title; will you be offering your book here? 
posted by
Katray2
on May 22, 2013 at 6:55 AM
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