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pat,
- wonderfully written, interesting story. i cant wait to find out now how you feel about him staying with his wife now. i wonder if i am thinking what you are. will not say until i read all of your story. sometimes we think we have things figured out when years later and years wiser we see things for what they really were.
posted by
jeansaw
on May 21, 2013 at 9:58 PM
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Quite natural Pat, I would have liked to have known if he still lived with his wife. Perhaps he would be afraid that women would turn out to be the same eventually.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 21, 2013 at 10:31 AM
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PatB
Terrific real life type story luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 20, 2013 at 6:23 PM
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great writing dear Pat and very bitter sweet. Makes one stop and say a
thank you for all the blessings and happiness one has
posted by
Kabu
on May 20, 2013 at 5:30 PM
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Pat...
A good short little bittersweet story.
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posted by
Rumor
on May 20, 2013 at 3:08 PM
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I'm in awe, Pat.
posted by
Mia890
on May 20, 2013 at 10:19 AM
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Oops - feel busted now. Like Sherm, I still wear my wedding rings for that reason.....
posted by
adnohr
on May 20, 2013 at 7:44 AM
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Pat
Nothing reminds us as much of the passing of the years as meeting an old flame...
posted by
Nautikos
on May 20, 2013 at 6:42 AM
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Re: Annicita.... is there more coming...
- 30 - is reporter's code for "the end." In the days when we typed our news items and sent them to the copy editor for typesetting, each page had to be marked with - more - to indicate there was more to the story or - 30 - to end it.
posted by
Pat_B
on May 20, 2013 at 6:10 AM
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mmmmmm....is there more coming or is that it?
posted by
Annicita
on May 20, 2013 at 5:55 AM
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