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Re: jeansaw
yes bill i believe in that place too
posted by
jeansaw
on May 14, 2013 at 12:25 PM
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Re: jimmy
when i wrote this piecet i never thought about an empty womb, but rather what i may have heard in my mothers womb. it makes one sad to think they cause someone distress with somthing they wrote. you know that i have 2 sons, they are almost 7 years apart in age and when my first was reaching about 4 i thought i would never have another, as i wanted at least 3-4 children. so my lhusband and i started to look into adoption, but before we got a child, i conceived. i had a cousin that was told she woud never have children so she adopted and raised a son and when he turned 18 she had her own child.
so take heart, we do not know what life has instore, i wish you the best.
posted by
jeansaw
on May 14, 2013 at 12:24 PM
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Re: cc
i think you are right about the watery sounds and why the sound of water is soothing. what is going on outside must be muffled sounds at best.
posted by
jeansaw
on May 14, 2013 at 12:15 PM
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Re: Profound!
thank you for visiting and the comment
posted by
jeansaw
on May 14, 2013 at 12:13 PM
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Re: That is too deep for me.
justi, thank you for the comment
posted by
jeansaw
on May 14, 2013 at 12:12 PM
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Re: fsi
thank you for the comment
posted by
jeansaw
on May 14, 2013 at 12:12 PM
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jeansaw
$Jean, for myself I believe in that place love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on May 14, 2013 at 7:30 AM
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I think there may be a couple of ways to interpret this. My wife and I have no children ( but not from a lack of trying ) and I believe this could be seen as something somewhat sad and depressing to think about . . . 
posted by
JimmyA
on May 14, 2013 at 6:31 AM
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I think it is a feeling of security most of the time with soft watery sounds probably why folk like the sound of a babbling brook. Quite an interesting piece. 
posted by
C_C_T
on May 14, 2013 at 12:09 AM
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Profound!


posted by
Katray2
on May 13, 2013 at 7:21 PM
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That is too deep for me.
posted by
Justi
on May 13, 2013 at 7:09 PM
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Powerful imagery you have in this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 13, 2013 at 5:43 PM
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