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Untenable
Situation as it stands: I have the woman who calls me "Liar. The other woman irrecovably calls me sarcastic. She can't see it any other way because she's wearing blinders.
I'm actually better off, now, thanks to the medication. Mentally, I'm much improved but for around a month I've been on guard. It feels like I'm under siege-by the residents. John is a mountain compared to me and admits that the smiles I see on his face aren't a reflection of what's going on behind it.
It seems that Demetrius and Ben are much worse off, like their medication has left them in the lurch. Demetrius roars with laughter for hours at a time, and Ben is subject to his own sense of humor; maniacal giggling.
posted by
1jefferson3Walnut
on March 14, 2013 at 7:48 AM
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You can probably write whatever you want, post it wherever you want, whenever you want. It's all good . . . 
posted by
JimmyA
on March 11, 2013 at 6:20 AM
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EMEnjoy posting and see. You’ve received good advice. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on March 11, 2013 at 2:57 AM
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sure you can...but mine has lots more in it....and as pat says...you can put chapters of a book or parts of a short story...i do that in another blog
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Annicita
on March 10, 2013 at 4:15 PM
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You can write as much as you've got time and energy to produce.
But I've found that readers prefer items - even chapters in a series - to be shorter rather than longer. A thousand words of active story may hold them, but 500 words or less will receive more reflective comments. Poetry works too. Have fun with it.
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Pat_B
on March 9, 2013 at 1:08 PM
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