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I LIKE HOW YOU KEEP IT GOING BUT THAT RAY CHARACTER I DON'T LIKE.HE MAKES ME MAD.VERY UPSET.
BUT ANYWAYS,GOOD STORY.GREAT.
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on February 22, 2013 at 10:13 AM
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He is one dominating individual! She needs to get out of that place! sam 
posted by
sam444
on February 21, 2013 at 2:47 PM
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Good story, could be so true sadly. Well done though for completing on time.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 21, 2013 at 11:14 AM
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You do a wonderful job at writing prose.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 21, 2013 at 10:13 AM
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