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The poems fit well together...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 17, 2013 at 11:52 AM
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Both of these poems were awesome! Great reads, too! sam 
posted by
sam444
on February 17, 2013 at 11:20 AM
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As bad as waiting for the washing bowl to make the pudding Adnohr. I still see the descendants in their posh cars.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 17, 2013 at 12:19 AM
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Re: ChiffChaff
Try writing them down old pal, it is supposed to be therapeutics . Well unless you tell anyone.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 17, 2013 at 12:13 AM
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Re: I, too, have days like this. Sip a bit of Bushmill's and wait for clarity.
Yes right Pat, that is one way of getting around the corner.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 17, 2013 at 12:11 AM
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Re:Kabu
Send supper by e-mail no lambs tails please. Never mind it will be Spring soon and all those little treasures under the blanket of snow will bloom again.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 17, 2013 at 12:08 AM
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Never mind Taps your friends probably think you catch on to the next joke quickly. 
posted by
C_C_T
on February 17, 2013 at 12:03 AM
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Re: CCT
Cheers Naut you are so good at explaining, I have to go back and read the query.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 17, 2013 at 12:01 AM
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CCT
The first one 'captures', or at least marvellously hints at, to the degree that is possible, the ephemeral nature of our perceptions and fleeting thoughts - very, very well done...The second one is just as good, even if vastly different, and with that hilarious ending which is actually dead serious...You deserve two stars tonight...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 16, 2013 at 5:45 PM
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I'm having fun reading your readers' comments. LOL
Clarity does not come to me as quickly, on anything, as it used to. I was once quite quick to get the point of anything, now I have to ponder for a while. I'm often the last one to laugh at a joke after everyone else has gone on to something else.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 16, 2013 at 3:04 PM
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no clarity for me...I live in La La land ...along with lots of strange folk
you should join me sometime, I am sure they would welcome you. I suppose it is too late in the day to ask you to Supper.
posted by
Kabu
on February 16, 2013 at 2:04 PM
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I, too, have days like this. Sip a bit of Bushmill's and wait for clarity.
posted by
Pat_B
on February 16, 2013 at 1:10 PM
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ChiffChaff
My own dreams of late are more than enough to keep me occupied, I can't sort yours out Bro. LOL
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 16, 2013 at 12:29 PM
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LOL - you're right. I imagine Uncle Fred will steer clear of any permanent relationship after hearing all that bit! And dor the first poem, I think it is a real emotion for some. Maybe the poet was looking too hard.
posted by
adnohr
on February 16, 2013 at 11:34 AM
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