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I feel that you are doing a great jobs with your poem and your efforts to say goodbye...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 14, 2013 at 9:56 AM
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Not disappointing at all! I think many of us are looking forward to Spring, no matter how many acts it takes . . . 
posted by
JimmyA
on February 14, 2013 at 7:49 AM
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Amazing and lovely work, Jay!
Why do you think you are disappointing? 
As I mentioned earlier, you will be greatly missed but I do understand about needing to focus on writing to accomplish goals. I feel your unique gifts will bring all you hope for. And maybe when the book is done, you can return to Blogit and list it here too?..I'm sure you would have sales! 
posted by
Katray2
on February 14, 2013 at 7:09 AM
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There's nothing disappointing about this piece, although goodbyes are always a disappointment
posted by
lionreign
on February 14, 2013 at 2:58 AM
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posted by
Collene
on February 13, 2013 at 11:46 PM
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I am not saying goodbye because I know you will be back one sunny day. Lovely gentle poem today.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 13, 2013 at 11:15 PM
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UtahJay
I'll miss your writing pard and hope you will come back.
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 13, 2013 at 8:44 PM
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So nice!! I love walking alone (well, with the doggies) and if anyone wonders, I truly don't care. You keep mentioning leaving...and you don't have to give your reason, of course, but I am curious......
posted by
adnohr
on February 13, 2013 at 7:20 PM
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I can see myself walking all alone picking daisies because they are my favorite flower! It's sad that you must go and I wish things were different but do what you must and I shall miss you, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 13, 2013 at 7:19 PM
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You are a talented writer. And sure you will be missed. Looking forward to see you again soon. Wish you the best to you and your family
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on February 13, 2013 at 7:17 PM
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Why goodbye... ? You must have your reasons for leaving my friend and sad as the idea of not being able to read you makes me, I know you have to do what you have to do. Reading what we write here in Blogit puts us in the unique position of knowing someone heart to heart, bypassing the traps that society usually places upon our relationships, and so, we get to feel what others feel, experience what they have experienced, if only for the instant we are reading their words... Yours, your words, have touched many of us deeply and have earned you a place in our hearts. Please know that you will always be in my thoughts. Good luck my friend Please keep in touch and comeback to us soon. xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on February 13, 2013 at 6:25 PM
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I refuse to say Goodbye, we need each other all of us ,and will remain
friends. Sniff sniff Sniff...poetry is wonderful as always...Sniff....and one day... Sniff...yeah Spring...Sniff.. will be back...Sniff ...and you with it ...Sniff... I hope... Sniff!
posted by
Kabu
on February 13, 2013 at 4:24 PM
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Hi I have been reading your work but I havn't left a comment, sorry if you thought me rood 
You clearly have a lot of talent!!!!
posted by
Collene
on February 13, 2013 at 2:01 PM
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Utah
This is very good! And I certainly hope you'll be back some day soon! And, by the way, I'm not sure why you have to say goodbye...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 13, 2013 at 1:48 PM
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I've always had trouble saying goodbye.
Hope to see you again soon.
posted by
Pat_B
on February 13, 2013 at 1:33 PM
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