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Love the hearts formed after the Storm, and just as Valentine's day is moving in in 30 minutes!! Lovely poem, Lovely Green hearts. I will certainly miss you.
posted by
mariss9
on February 13, 2013 at 9:25 PM
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An excellent use of rain in this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 12, 2013 at 9:45 AM
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Healing also very gentle Jay. 
posted by
C_C_T
on February 11, 2013 at 11:36 PM
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This is a very nice poem that is rather evocative, too! sam 
posted by
sam444
on February 11, 2013 at 7:37 PM
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adnohr
Yes, I have posted pieces of this in a different poem as I always look for something better. I believe no poetry is ever finished, at least of my work...All are works in progress.
posted by
UtahJay
on February 11, 2013 at 3:34 PM
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Have you posted this one before? Or maybe it was one similar. Either/Or, it is well done, and thin lines do disappear sometimes.
posted by
adnohr
on February 11, 2013 at 3:19 PM
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UtahJay
Beautiful explanation of a dance in the rain, I'd enjoy that too pard.
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 11, 2013 at 3:07 PM
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I would rather swim in the ocean but then we are all different.
posted by
Kabu
on February 11, 2013 at 2:32 PM
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It's been a while, but sometimes I like to stand in the warm rain and let me wash over me. What a feeling . . .
posted by
JimmyA
on February 11, 2013 at 2:24 PM
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