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He demanded, Jay? Would that be part of why the son becomes wayward? This is a beautiful and touching poem, but I have the feeling that maybe the forgiving is to be done by both parties.
posted by
adnohr
on February 10, 2013 at 8:26 PM
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Very emotive Jay, we all have regrets.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 10, 2013 at 10:35 AM
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Felt it in my soul...
posted by
Eleanor_Jazz
on February 10, 2013 at 5:44 AM
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Hauntingly heartfelt and poignant, Jay!
Amazing verse; may peace flow...
posted by
Katray2
on February 9, 2013 at 11:17 PM
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SINOME
For forgetting how blue his eyes were, he was a man who demanded I know my surroundings at all times.
posted by
UtahJay
on February 9, 2013 at 7:33 PM
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<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>> I am sure he not only forgives you whatever it is you think he has to forgive but that he is proud of you and the man you have become... Thankfully i still have mine and i can only guess how hard it must be to miss someone I love so very much. This is an amazing poem my friend, a proof of your love and a beautiful tribute to him. Be well xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on February 9, 2013 at 5:11 PM
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very emotive Jay...makes a person think of their own Father and Oh I
loved him, I still love him and miss him every day.
posted by
Kabu
on February 9, 2013 at 2:28 PM
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Now you have me thinking about my father . . . 
posted by
JimmyA
on February 9, 2013 at 2:19 PM
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A powerful poem there. The question at the end really strikes me.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 9, 2013 at 12:17 PM
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