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True - it is a wonderful description of the creative process, and the love, and even the ending is uplifting through the sad reality demanded.

posted by adnohr on February 10, 2013 at 9:21 PM | link to this | reply

A lot of different meanings behind this one, at least for me. Nice! 

posted by JimmyA on February 9, 2013 at 2:18 PM | link to this | reply

What an incredible poem this is.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on February 9, 2013 at 12:30 PM | link to this | reply

The memory of that smile...

A wonderful image of the creative process.  The close is so poignant, having to sell his work to fund his care.  The financing of old age care is causing a lot of heartache in Britain too and is being discussed in our parliament.

posted by 2Philomena on February 9, 2013 at 10:44 AM | link to this | reply

what a poem what a love story and how you have captured the

artist. I have so little talent but I know the holding in the hand waiting for the rock to speak and then never being satisfied that I did the image justice.

posted by Kabu on February 8, 2013 at 2:10 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

A love story in form of a poem - beautiful. And reading it, I was also reminded of the painting with the world's most famous smile - la Gioconda's, and wonder if Leonardo loved her...

posted by Nautikos on February 8, 2013 at 11:33 AM | link to this | reply

you always write interesting stories, how do you do it everyday?

posted by Lanetay on February 8, 2013 at 8:01 AM | link to this | reply

This is a very romantic poem 

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on February 8, 2013 at 3:22 AM | link to this | reply

Could be a true story Simone sadly many an artist is in love with his work and the poor model is A Muse.  

posted by C_C_T on February 7, 2013 at 10:59 PM | link to this | reply

The canvas, the open page, is always alive in love's eye, in love's heart...Well done my friend.

posted by UtahJay on February 7, 2013 at 8:23 PM | link to this | reply