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It is interesting how the outside that we see of a person and the inside of the same person fit together.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 7, 2013 at 9:34 AM
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I understood this one perfectly, I have afflictions that resonate with its meaning too! sam 
posted by
sam444
on February 7, 2013 at 7:38 AM
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UtahJay
®An effective image that compels meaning for your readers Jay. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on February 7, 2013 at 7:09 AM
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A very sad poem. Hopefully the pain will be shared. God bliss
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on February 7, 2013 at 3:42 AM
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Don't worry Jay it will soften with age as I suspect it is doing.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 6, 2013 at 11:01 PM
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I wrote this some time ago, it is about PTSD and addiction...It's okay. Didn't mean to scare anybody I was just in a hurry to post and picked a piece that I should have made some changes in.
posted by
UtahJay
on February 6, 2013 at 7:08 PM
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Powerful poem... raw and honest. if its current, if that black abysm is lurking ever so close... don't wait my friend... You are not alone. Take refuge in those who love you and seek help. We all have our crosses to bear but the weight of them gets easier when we share it. G-d bless you. xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on February 6, 2013 at 6:57 PM
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Very powerful and well done, my Friend...
May Love keep you soaring...
posted by
Katray2
on February 6, 2013 at 6:43 PM
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UtahJay
Well I certainly see a man of integrity, and a man who can define his very soul. I see a man, as I see another Man, who has picked up his cross and follows Him. He who will never let you or me down. God Bless you my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 6, 2013 at 4:38 PM
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Utah
A powerful poem that sounds like a cry for help - and I sincerely hope you find it; if nowhere else, at least in your faith...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 6, 2013 at 4:09 PM
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