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Son #1 spent three years stationed in Japan and had some cultural run-ins in Tokyo.  He also met some Japanese people that he dearly loved and still talks about after all these years.  Can't wait til the next part.

posted by TAPS. on February 6, 2013 at 12:14 PM | link to this | reply

You do a fine job at building a tense scene. I look forward to seeing what the resolution was.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on February 6, 2013 at 9:42 AM | link to this | reply

Nautikos

AYThe narrator’s rough and good NautBC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on February 6, 2013 at 7:33 AM | link to this | reply

Aw, sweet cultural disconnect...!

How we accidentally offend is only part of it: How we are offended, where we never expected or meant to be, is even more interesting.  

posted by Ciel on February 6, 2013 at 6:19 AM | link to this | reply

I hope it was a compliment Naut. Could it have been tiredness and the hot bath that made you react in that way. If it had been all English speaking it would have been war.

posted by C_C_T on February 5, 2013 at 11:21 PM | link to this | reply

Nautikos

I am not sure I am getting all this. I am enjoying your writing, very interesting.

posted by Justi on February 5, 2013 at 7:29 PM | link to this | reply

I feel your anger in my face, that is where anger shows first with me, but after reading you for a while now, I kind of think you two will become fast friends soon enough...We will see tomorrow. A great series Naut.

posted by UtahJay on February 5, 2013 at 7:26 PM | link to this | reply

Knowing a bit about the Japanese culture, I imagine the poor fellow was devastated that his joke was taken as an insult, and the others were trying to explain that he didn't meant it that way. Looking forward to the next post. Terrific writing, by the way!

posted by adnohr on February 5, 2013 at 4:55 PM | link to this | reply

I can just hear the commotion and confusion echoing off the iron walls.

I do hope you all had a good laugh together, otherwise the voyage would be awful.

posted by Pat_B on February 5, 2013 at 3:14 PM | link to this | reply

I would have the same as you! Now, to find out how it concludes! sam  

posted by sam444 on February 5, 2013 at 2:53 PM | link to this | reply

Did the little man get a help into the briney sea????

or was it just a misunderstanding!!!! we wait for the next post ....

posted by Kabu on February 5, 2013 at 2:35 PM | link to this | reply

Nautikos

A cliffhanger so Like I'm picturing some guys hanging on a squidjigger bruised and bloody and you dissecting one of them instead of a squid.LOL

posted by WileyJohn on February 5, 2013 at 12:38 PM | link to this | reply