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The poem was steamy, all right, but not what I expected.

My cousin Bob came home from that same region after WWII. He never talked much about it, except to complain about jungle rot attacking his socks.

posted by Pat_B on January 18, 2013 at 9:36 AM | link to this | reply

The second stanza really strikes me and made me look at the first differently, knowing that the times were really really rough.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 18, 2013 at 9:22 AM | link to this | reply

what an amazing picture and poem Jay!!

posted by Kabu on January 18, 2013 at 9:02 AM | link to this | reply

UtahJay

KIf you can’t stay post short think big. Awesome poem Jay. BC-A, 

posted by BC-A on January 18, 2013 at 6:48 AM | link to this | reply

UtahJay

KIf you can’t stay think short think big. Awesome poem Jay. BC-A, 

posted by BC-A on January 18, 2013 at 6:47 AM | link to this | reply

I like the ending. How many times we experienced that  I am glad that you are staying for another month. I am sure you will be missed by me and others. 

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on January 18, 2013 at 4:42 AM | link to this | reply

Reality kicks Jay it would be far worse if you had to endure this tomorrow. I sometimes think how on frosty foggy days I tramped round wet through delivering pariffin. Some old dears wanted it in pint bottles.  

posted by C_C_T on January 17, 2013 at 10:31 PM | link to this | reply