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You capture the intensity of anger well.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 16, 2013 at 9:52 AM
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UtahJay
AAnd for all Jay. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on January 15, 2013 at 7:23 PM
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That was rather poignant! It has a universal feel to it, too! I liked how you used thorns, excellent! sam 
posted by
sam444
on January 15, 2013 at 3:04 PM
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I suppose I should have mentioned the old tricicle, I think of it for some reason when my world goes south.
posted by
UtahJay
on January 15, 2013 at 1:31 PM
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like unturned "PEDALS" like on a bicycle or unturned "PETALS" like that of
a flower?....
posted by
PoeticPoetry
on January 15, 2013 at 1:11 PM
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oh families can be so cruel. I have one Sister and I have to forgive
her sharp tongue regularly. any more than one sibling would have done me in!! Yet she calls me back to Australia yet again this year and I will go....who can figure it all out.
posted by
Kabu
on January 15, 2013 at 11:36 AM
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Isn't it heavy though? And sometimes not to easy to throw off. Excellent writing!
posted by
adnohr
on January 15, 2013 at 11:34 AM
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Probably good to get it out of your system Jay. Survival technique
posted by
C_C_T
on January 15, 2013 at 11:34 AM
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