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You do a fine job at building the scene.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 14, 2013 at 10:16 AM
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SINOME
Why it is the conscience of the reader, the soul, that is what the patron goddess of universe is.
posted by
UtahJay
on January 13, 2013 at 10:59 PM
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SINOME
posted by
UtahJay
on January 13, 2013 at 10:56 PM
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UtahJ
This is a flowing and beautifully done one as is the norm for you.
posted by
Justi
on January 13, 2013 at 10:12 PM
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hmmm I am afraid I did not get the "patron godesses" but the poem was great... as all of yours lately very telling, as if you were telling us a story in coded installments... Its fascinating... and l feel ike a little girl at bedtime when the story is over , wanting to yell : one more please! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 13, 2013 at 9:21 PM
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Utah
Very good! And it reminded me why I am fond of those patron godesses...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 13, 2013 at 4:00 PM
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I really enjoyed the innuendo in this poem! KUDOS! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 13, 2013 at 1:56 PM
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