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A very intense poem you got there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 12, 2013 at 10:49 AM
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how could one Not want to read such rasw passion. I may not ever want to
have lived it but reading this is so insightful. Write on...I'll not complain.
posted by
Kabu
on January 12, 2013 at 10:07 AM
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Pretty isn't really powerful, Jay..
and this poem is. Powerful. 
posted by
Katray2
on January 12, 2013 at 9:51 AM
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It is OK Jay We don't expect you to sing like a nightingale when in a cage.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 12, 2013 at 8:30 AM
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Sounds like a pretty nasty "trip." You've obviously grown since then . . . 
posted by
JimmyA
on January 12, 2013 at 8:06 AM
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What's not pretty about this? Its well written and drenched in raw emotions... Its n honest look inside. I personally loved it xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 12, 2013 at 7:44 AM
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