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This is going very well. It's got enough questions to build curiousity
and suspense, and enough backstory to balance - I'm already loving your characters. 
Write on!
posted by
Pat_B
on January 13, 2013 at 3:33 AM
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A lot is going on in Veronica's life...You enable the reader to feel what she is going through...As far as possibly adding a new blog goes, I say do whatever makes you happy.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 12, 2013 at 10:46 AM
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I , like Justi , also like the idea of keeping the letters and the "all about you" blogs separate... It will be harder to keep up with both but it will give your readers more continuity with the story of the letters which by the way is great. I find this latest one easy to read. Its sweet and familiar as letters between two people that love eachother should be. ( perhaps a book in the future?) Keep writting darlin' wether together or separate your talent will shine through :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 12, 2013 at 7:51 AM
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I almost hate to ask but, are these letters verbatim? I've never read letters between siblings before that sounded quite like this. I have two sisters that I'm very close to, and we've never had to have such an exchange! And as for creating a seperate blog page for them, I don't think it would really make that much of a difference. Whatever you write will be read . . . 
posted by
JimmyA
on January 12, 2013 at 7:30 AM
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adnohr
Whether you do two or not which, I would really like two, it it about how you feel you would enjoy the writing process. This is really creative, I love it. The usual blog is so wonderful because we keep up with you and most of us are doing a refined diary to some sort on here. You surprise us, we love your work.
posted by
Justi
on January 12, 2013 at 12:20 AM
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What mischief? that would be great. I like reading most things you write so I don't really care what you do as long as you do it. You must not neglect your business though, man cannot live on bread alone.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 11, 2013 at 11:25 PM
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Two blogs would be great, but any way you do it (one blog or two) will be fine with me.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 11, 2013 at 6:25 PM
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I absolutely love this! It is captivating! My goodness this is awesome! I do think you should start another blog cuz I don't want it messed up with your personal life (LMAO, I joshing!!!) But another blog with it by itself would be grand! I saw your comment and go HABS! I have no idea what the Wings are up to but I wish hockey was starting this weekend! Go WINGS! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 11, 2013 at 6:20 PM
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If you wrote three things a day I would read them dear adnorh.
this letter writing is going to be just great and the suspense is a killer as I cling to that Cliff.
posted by
Kabu
on January 11, 2013 at 4:48 PM
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adnohr
This is really fascinating! I love the way you manage to get 'background' into it. I am beginning to be concerned about her brother now, LOL, and about her as well...And yes, I think it would be a good idea to keep this separate from your 'Tales from the Bush'...
And another thing: Ben's favourite ball is a squeeker, but not the kind that looks like a tennis ball; it's a little larger, is completely smooth (without the usual tennis ball fuzz) and a bit softer. It also bounces a bit more; both he and I prefer it to the one you mentioned, which he also had, but which 'died' a while ago...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 11, 2013 at 4:31 PM
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