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I kept wondering who this was while I was reading.  It definitely held my interest.  Waiting for more.

posted by TAPS. on January 11, 2013 at 6:22 PM | link to this | reply

Oh I think it is a wonderful idea and that you should do it. Of course the way you write anything is wonderful and makes for a very good read. As a matter of fact I am dying to know about this letters history.

posted by UtahJay on January 11, 2013 at 12:22 AM | link to this | reply

Quite interesting Adnohr, I wonder if you will have to make them long letters eventually to enable the onward flow . I suppose other characters could join in. I think it will be fun to do and who knows.

posted by C_C_T on January 11, 2013 at 12:11 AM | link to this | reply

adnohr

That was  terrific, what a good mind you have to work with, I have a hard time coming up with subjects to write about.

posted by WileyJohn on January 10, 2013 at 6:25 PM | link to this | reply

I really enjoyed the suspense in this letter. Does she find him, is this

really the last chance and why the aversion to authorities. More please. A great way to write a story.

posted by Kabu on January 10, 2013 at 5:55 PM | link to this | reply

That's a grand idea! The first letter caught my eye and it has so much potential! You set up a few things that makes the reader long for more! So, I have another! lol And, I will save time for hockey! It's good the games are at night because I know I will want nothing except hockey! But, I shall be torn once again soon because baseball is about to begin the 2013 season with spring training next month! For now, it's all about HOCKEY! sam 

posted by sam444 on January 10, 2013 at 2:30 PM | link to this | reply

Victoria

Dear dear, loved it. I love the script, but a bit larger and lighter. You have built intrigue, now I want to know where that runaway is and what he is up to and what will you do if he takes the threat. Love it.

posted by Justi on January 10, 2013 at 12:48 PM | link to this | reply

I am liking this. I look forward to more letters. You have me wondering what the response will be.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 10, 2013 at 9:47 AM | link to this | reply

Good idea. I seem to remember from a lit class long ago

that the very first published novel was done in the form of letters among correspondents. I could be wrong about that, tho. Have fun! :)

posted by Pat_B on January 10, 2013 at 9:18 AM | link to this | reply

I think I will have to read more to get the full gist of what is happening before I actually comment. Hopefully, things don't get too sad or melancholy ( I have two sisters ). 

posted by JimmyA on January 10, 2013 at 8:17 AM | link to this | reply

adnohr

Fascinating! You're reviving a long tradition, and I'm eager for more...

posted by Nautikos on January 10, 2013 at 7:58 AM | link to this | reply

Very interesting approach!

I'm already wondering, and caring about the answers to the questions you've roused. 

posted by Ciel on January 10, 2013 at 7:31 AM | link to this | reply