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So many things to ponder with this fine poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 10, 2013 at 9:56 AM
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Quite interesting Jay well done.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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The poem creates images with words beautifully!
posted by
shamasehar
on January 9, 2013 at 9:09 PM
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Makes me think of a werewolf who doesn't wanna be one...anxious that daylight arrive soon....sooner, so that he can stop. I wouldn't want to be reading this under a full moon!
posted by
adnohr
on January 9, 2013 at 6:20 PM
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I see someone looking in on life, the outcast on the street.
posted by
Kabu
on January 9, 2013 at 5:18 PM
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UtahJay
TThings look clearer in black and white Jay. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on January 9, 2013 at 4:28 PM
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Love the poem. 
It seems to birth a certain way and then when it is finish it seems to be a rebirth of something else while at the same time it manages to stay together.
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on January 9, 2013 at 1:48 PM
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An intriguing poem my friend. So many images intertwined in those lines... meanings upon meanings. Well dress ladies... wild dogs.. laughter and sharp white teeth...wow Excellent work. xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 9, 2013 at 1:09 PM
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