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That sure is readable. It definitely holds one's attention.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 8, 2013 at 12:54 PM
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Well of course we knew she had forgiven him the author would not be writing the story
if she had not. I wish I were as forgiving.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 7, 2013 at 11:41 PM
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Pat
It flows...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 7, 2013 at 6:23 PM
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PatB
Amazing dialogue there, well done friend PatB
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 7, 2013 at 2:30 PM
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A great write, I think you have captured Margaret's feelings and portrayed
them to us perfectly. Crying when he died, and then realizing that forgiving him was her own release, that hate is just exhasuting....i found that out too so this reads Like an Oh yes that's right...to me. 
posted by
Kabu
on January 7, 2013 at 12:42 PM
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Oops!
posted by
adnohr
on January 7, 2013 at 8:15 AM
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Re: forgive?
She couldn't do it then because she'd already done it.
posted by
Pat_B
on January 7, 2013 at 6:50 AM
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It's like being there and watching all this from a side table. Only thing...confusion here...she tells him that she can't forgive, then a couple of lines later she tells him that he already is forgiven...or was she talking about the kids?
posted by
adnohr
on January 7, 2013 at 6:42 AM
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