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All alone......I felt every word you spoke. Nice!

posted by CRShelley on January 7, 2013 at 10:04 PM | link to this | reply

A lot of pain there.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 6, 2013 at 4:03 PM | link to this | reply

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óExcellent. Alienation’s sad. Once I participated in an exercise of total darkness, listening to Neil Diamond’s I Am I Said. It was for volunteering on a crisis hotline at AT&T Long Lines in New Jersey then. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on January 6, 2013 at 6:38 AM | link to this | reply

Indeed, you have captured the emotion rather beautifully! sam 

posted by sam444 on January 6, 2013 at 5:15 AM | link to this | reply

i can feel the energy.powerful stuff.

posted by NIGHTWRITE on January 5, 2013 at 8:23 PM | link to this | reply

I read both poems and thought they were heartfelt...Welcome to Blogit.

posted by UtahJay on January 5, 2013 at 8:07 PM | link to this | reply

Heart felt poem :-)  xoxo

posted by Sinome on January 5, 2013 at 7:57 PM | link to this | reply