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I agree with the others. Very well done! And it is quite easy to see it as a book that children will love!
posted by
adnohr
on January 5, 2013 at 4:06 AM
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Very nice Jay brilliant considering you do not feel like eating fish at the moment.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 4, 2013 at 11:49 PM
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This is such a nice and easy language for the kids to understand and to get entertained
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on January 4, 2013 at 9:47 PM
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A wonderful poem/story. You take the reader on a wonderful ride.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 4, 2013 at 7:37 PM
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This is so delightful.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 4, 2013 at 5:33 PM
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This is a book and it would sell in Australia for the Children all try to
learn some Japanese....and it is so well done. Hope you are feeling better Jay.
posted by
Kabu
on January 4, 2013 at 5:29 PM
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Love the story verses and especially love the illustrations.
This needs to be in book form... 
Write on!
posted by
Pat_B
on January 4, 2013 at 2:14 PM
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