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Life can be bittersweet and is rarely equal though we try. 
posted by
mariss9
on December 30, 2012 at 8:10 AM
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The emotions are described very well in this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 29, 2012 at 11:55 AM
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I agree with CCT. I was going to say the same thing 
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on December 29, 2012 at 9:44 AM
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Jay It feels like you are trying to assess the thoughts that flow through your mind it is the way poetry is born. You do a good job capturing and preserving those emotions. 
posted by
C_C_T
on December 29, 2012 at 8:20 AM
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UtahJay
YThe readers are awakened by this narrative imagery Jay. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on December 29, 2012 at 5:31 AM
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