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{He needs a comet to make his getaway Jay. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on November 20, 2012 at 11:52 AM
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Well written with a cool twist...:)
posted by
Katray2
on November 20, 2012 at 11:13 AM
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I did not see that last stanza coming there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 20, 2012 at 9:28 AM
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Utah
This is excellent! And it did bring back memories of an adventure of mine many moons ago, that I was fortunate enough to live through without having aroused the attention of the constabulary...
posted by
Nautikos
on November 20, 2012 at 7:43 AM
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few edits....surely....wear
wonderful telling of a drunken adventure
posted by
Annicita
on November 20, 2012 at 6:00 AM
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LOL That was an unexpected ending! Brilliant work, my friend
posted by
lionreign
on November 20, 2012 at 3:57 AM
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No, but he made us walk to town, about five miles...No beer.
posted by
UtahJay
on November 20, 2012 at 12:06 AM
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LMAO! And did the officer laugh as you 'waxed poetic'?
posted by
adnohr
on November 19, 2012 at 11:50 PM
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Yes a great feeling Jay and you felt happy all the way to the station.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 19, 2012 at 11:22 PM
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