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Re: Williams' quote is cerainly memorable.

posted by 2902 on November 12, 2012 at 2:42 PM | link to this | reply

That is really quite profound - great work!

posted by lionreign on November 12, 2012 at 4:24 AM | link to this | reply

Re: By all means try it! For me the challenge is putting some weight in

line 3, and phrasing lines 1 & 2 so they don't break off the sense too sharply at their ends.  Finally, stuffing everything into three lines can make me twist the words in a cramped and awkward way that can sound awful if I'm not careful - it's like trying too hard to make a rhyme.  Sometimes it helps to make the title part of the sentence.

posted by 2902 on November 12, 2012 at 2:58 AM | link to this | reply

Now you have got me thinking Haiku's.

posted by UtahJay on November 11, 2012 at 10:57 PM | link to this | reply

And a B good job too sometimes.

posted by C_C_T on November 11, 2012 at 10:12 PM | link to this | reply

Me too

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on November 11, 2012 at 6:45 PM | link to this | reply

Me also

posted by Straightforward on November 11, 2012 at 6:14 PM | link to this | reply

so true...hope I am getting all of mine out there....

posted by Annicita on November 11, 2012 at 6:13 PM | link to this | reply