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I love the way in which you arranged the poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 9, 2012 at 9:58 AM
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UtahJay
I watched a TV movie last week that your poem seems to describe as I understand it and I'm terrible at always getting the point. Hey, I'm a retired mechanic don't forget. LOL The movie I watched was about Polish Jews escaping the Nazi's through the sewer works. You have captured the essence of that movie even if that isn't what I read in it.
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 8, 2012 at 5:51 PM
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UtahJ
Awesome work.
posted by
Justi
on November 8, 2012 at 4:52 PM
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I can see that what you were watching moved you deeply for it is within the
lines of your work. Well done.
posted by
Kabu
on November 8, 2012 at 4:47 PM
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quick edits....carry, follow, truly
wonderful imagery and form of poem...
posted by
Annicita
on November 8, 2012 at 1:42 PM
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You may say it was "just something", but it sounds as if you were deeply
into it! If so, I understand. When I read Tolkien to my son Bobby when he was small, I remember trying to fit my voice to the magical stuff I was reading to him. We both got carried away by it all and couldn't wait for the next bedtime. The world in your head cannot be denied!
posted by
2902
on November 8, 2012 at 1:03 PM
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