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PatB

I think the writing is really helpful to that daughter he had luv.

posted by WileyJohn on November 10, 2012 at 5:30 PM | link to this | reply

This is difficult for no person is ever all right and another all wrong

although sometimes it does seem that way, I still like the idea of Mother dancing in heaven.

posted by Kabu on November 8, 2012 at 4:05 PM | link to this | reply

PatB, Mt ex is that way & I want nothing from her at all.

Some good memories though.

posted by dsm_tchr on November 8, 2012 at 12:40 PM | link to this | reply

Re: CCT - I wonder if women choose a mate similar to their father.

I've heard that too, CCT. Since I only had one role model, I think my first husband was basically like my mother, controlling and critical. But mom had my welfare at heart.

posted by Pat_B on November 8, 2012 at 9:38 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Annicita - why not contact him and see?

I had some momentary contact with him in '56 when my first baby daughter was born. That was 56 years ago, and I learned nothing beyond the fact that he took no responsibility for anything he'd done and wasn't interested in changing. He died in '68.

posted by Pat_B on November 8, 2012 at 9:35 AM | link to this | reply

follow where your instincts or needs take you....many a writer has resolved their past either through fiction and/or uncovering the truth....maybe you will do both....why not contact him and see ... 

posted by Annicita on November 8, 2012 at 9:01 AM | link to this | reply

I wonder Pat do women  when young subconsciously choose a mate similar to their father. It could be possible if one was trying to find a love that had been taken from them for whatever reason. Of course as one becomes more aware, one is probably not over enthusiastic with the choice.

posted by C_C_T on November 8, 2012 at 7:34 AM | link to this | reply

Suddenly I feel so... influential!

And that reminds me, I didn't get my flu shot yet, this year.

posted by Ciel on November 8, 2012 at 6:36 AM | link to this | reply

Now you and Ciel have me wondering about a person that was in my life for 50 years and I always wondered about but never even thought sociopath, but now I'm thinking....maybe.

posted by TAPS. on November 8, 2012 at 6:12 AM | link to this | reply

Whichever way you go (or your characters take you), I know it is going to be one great tale. You're that kind of a writer. Looking forward to reading it! 

posted by adnohr on November 8, 2012 at 5:48 AM | link to this | reply