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Re: There was surely enough trouble to go around!
posted by
2902
on November 5, 2012 at 8:56 AM
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That was pretty well the scene here too, and we just got the tail of the hurricane. Well written!
posted by
adnohr
on November 5, 2012 at 8:25 AM
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Re: Well, hostas are very discreet - they die down to nothing in the fall,
disappear, and pop back up as soon as possible in spring. Sound like anyone of the female persuasion that you know? Me neither.
posted by
2902
on November 5, 2012 at 7:36 AM
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ReClever idea! It changes the poem in a fresh way! I like the
music of the original idea - that sound was what I started with - but you've given me something to think about!
posted by
2902
on November 5, 2012 at 5:48 AM
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so long as they don't crash onto the car or my house!!
posted by
Kabu
on November 4, 2012 at 5:12 PM
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how about should do instead of then do? just a suggestion
posted by
Annicita
on November 4, 2012 at 3:42 PM
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Hurricanes tell trees to strip, but I think they do it willingly. I don't know about Hostas.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 4, 2012 at 11:50 AM
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