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- Go to NaNoWriMo total for Day 1: 2805 words - an old poem follows
great start to the write and love the poem. Keep on writing love.
posted by
Kabu
on November 2, 2012 at 6:15 PM
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Really great.
I love it. Btw, I'm from Spokane. Terrie
posted by
WednesdayAddams
on November 2, 2012 at 3:17 PM
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PatB
Lovely poem and I betcha he's still out there, go dance and have a happy weekend luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 2, 2012 at 10:22 AM
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I don't think I even speak that many words some days when I'm home alone and don't go out, let alone write them.....maybe say "Hi" to the mailman or something. 
posted by
TAPS.
on November 2, 2012 at 8:25 AM
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Very cute Pat, I expect you could still shake a leg, if the mood overtook you. Perhaps we shall all have to relearn a dance sitting down. Whilst hands beckon provocatively.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 2, 2012 at 7:39 AM
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Wow! Great poem, and I like Ciel's answer to it. SHe's right - not only the young dance.
posted by
adnohr
on November 2, 2012 at 5:47 AM
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We who never or no longer dance, our feet still know the steps
and if it really is him, he will know you.
posted by
Ciel
on November 2, 2012 at 5:46 AM
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