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Re: Fidget V
good that was what i was hoping to achieve in that one
posted by
Annicita
on October 25, 2012 at 5:57 AM
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thanks lion....i might write it from the victims viewpoint next...not sure....love to take the challenge and see where it goes
posted by
Annicita
on October 25, 2012 at 5:56 AM
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Fidget V
Wonderful, evocative imagery and a very spooky close.
posted by
2Philomena
on October 25, 2012 at 4:44 AM
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I like this one a lot - your imagery is both vivid and suggestive
posted by
lionreign
on October 25, 2012 at 3:19 AM
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Superb expression . Well said .
posted by
afzal50
on October 24, 2012 at 6:04 PM
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Re: this is a really scary series. well done
thanks it was my writing exercise that i picked out of the jar....
posted by
Annicita
on October 24, 2012 at 5:19 PM
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this is a really scary series. well done
posted by
Kabu
on October 24, 2012 at 4:19 PM
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go back and read Fidget IV it is described there cct
posted by
Annicita
on October 24, 2012 at 12:09 PM
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Re:
go back and read Fidget IV it is described there cct
posted by
Annicita
on October 24, 2012 at 12:09 PM
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thanks .... this was a difficult project at first
posted by
Annicita
on October 24, 2012 at 11:57 AM
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Re: interesting...
thanks
posted by
Annicita
on October 24, 2012 at 11:54 AM
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Come on A. what happened at the fatal moment
posted by
C_C_T
on October 24, 2012 at 10:51 AM
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You do a fine job with imagery.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 24, 2012 at 10:16 AM
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interesting...
posted by
PoeticPoetry
on October 24, 2012 at 8:52 AM
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Re: Annicita
mmmm....i hope i did a good job of it then
posted by
Annicita
on October 24, 2012 at 7:55 AM
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Annicita
v This captures personal moments. They’re hard to describe. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
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BC-A
on October 24, 2012 at 7:09 AM
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