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Nautikos
You should do more of this but in Arabic.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 8, 2013 at 5:02 PM
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Fabulous haiku it transported me to that creaking swing in an instant. Lovely xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 1, 2013 at 7:33 PM
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Excellent job here...
it fairly reeks of images and sounds... even the windows are 'alive' in this poem
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posted by
PoeticPoetry
on October 19, 2012 at 10:21 PM
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this is excellent a full picture of just as it is this time of the year.
posted by
Kabu
on October 18, 2012 at 3:28 PM
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I can hear the swing.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 18, 2012 at 10:29 AM
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Nautikos
CWe are not alone. There’s nice imagery Naut.BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on October 18, 2012 at 4:49 AM
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Some image there - the lone swings needs a push by its owner.
posted by
shobana
on October 18, 2012 at 4:20 AM
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That's quite a vivid word picture.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 17, 2012 at 11:01 PM
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Empty house, lonely good Naut.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 17, 2012 at 10:37 PM
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I like it
posted by
UtahJay
on October 17, 2012 at 10:35 PM
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