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the ending leaves one thinking that there must be a sequel to come.
well done darling.
posted by
Kabu
on October 16, 2012 at 5:32 PM
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PatB
I couldn't keep up with all this luv, sorry, but I can't keep up with Baldacci right now either, something about my nerves these days now that I'm working on.
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 16, 2012 at 5:20 PM
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PatB
I couldn't keep up with all this luv, sorry, but I can't keep up with Baldacci right now either, something about my nerves these days now that I'm working on.
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 16, 2012 at 5:17 PM
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the way things are going in society who knows?
posted by
Annicita
on October 16, 2012 at 12:53 PM
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Very good Pat a job to form a suitable ending for everyone, but the possibilities are still endless. Well done.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 16, 2012 at 10:45 AM
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Pat
This is excellently written - you maintain that underlying tension really well right to the end...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 16, 2012 at 7:11 AM
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Pat, is there a way for them to ... well escape?; Or is that the sequel?
posted by
dsm_tchr
on October 16, 2012 at 6:35 AM
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Great, great writing! And scary because something like this could actually happen - maybe not for the same reason, but being forced by those in power to do what they think you should do.....
posted by
adnohr
on October 16, 2012 at 4:48 AM
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