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Getting caught up here, finally.
Moab area has always been a special area for me.
We spent a lot of time exploring canyons and rafting rivers and climbing rocks.
I can definitely see it as a part of this story.

posted by TAPS. on October 13, 2012 at 11:13 PM | link to this | reply

This is fast paced and most exciting so many questions and mysteries.

love it

posted by Kabu on October 13, 2012 at 3:18 PM | link to this | reply

PatB

Now he's shot? Grrrrrrrr Shocking

posted by WileyJohn on October 13, 2012 at 3:08 PM | link to this | reply

PatB

Well that was a spot a fella didn't dare say 'no' to marriage, he was in bad shape in a hospital bed. Great writing luv.

posted by WileyJohn on October 13, 2012 at 2:54 PM | link to this | reply

Pat

High drama...

posted by Nautikos on October 13, 2012 at 12:11 PM | link to this | reply

the suspense is building....

posted by Annicita on October 13, 2012 at 11:05 AM | link to this | reply

Fantastic writing!! Edge of the seat stuff...LOVE IT!!

posted by adnohr on October 13, 2012 at 8:06 AM | link to this | reply

Pat B, fabulous!

posted by dsm_tchr on October 13, 2012 at 7:39 AM | link to this | reply

Re: CCT - I hate it when a main character gets the chop...

Stay tuned. Things are not always as they seem.

posted by Pat_B on October 13, 2012 at 6:47 AM | link to this | reply

Yes Pat Have a hug  you have to keep the reader happy, I hate it when a main character gets the chop. 

posted by C_C_T on October 13, 2012 at 6:38 AM | link to this | reply