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Pat
Again, very well written! And I am really looking forward to the next section, where she finds out what's going on...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 11, 2012 at 6:22 PM
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tomorrow I will be eager to read the jump ahead and see what happens.
posted by
Kabu
on October 11, 2012 at 4:02 PM
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PatB
Well, I think she'll find a better way and walk away from that manipulative guy.Good writing luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 11, 2012 at 3:50 PM
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Am loving this!! Looking forward to how they are going to tell her the truth...
posted by
adnohr
on October 11, 2012 at 1:30 PM
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Pat It is a bit of a job when the world is against you, I mean will she ever be able to have a child in the future. Perhaps, well I have seen a hen turn into cockerel when there was not one in the run. Await the explanation.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 11, 2012 at 10:54 AM
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interesting....
posted by
Annicita
on October 11, 2012 at 10:45 AM
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