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I know of many who have come to the realization that so much time was loss. It's somthing that they found to be very sad...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 1, 2012 at 9:42 AM
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Stunning...beautiful...a capturing note touching my own past...
posted by
Reflecting_teddypoet
on September 30, 2012 at 9:27 PM
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quick edit: 4th line 1st stanza....they're hot
nice job!
posted by
Annicita
on September 30, 2012 at 8:45 PM
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Memories when things were much better. This is carried from one generation to another.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 30, 2012 at 6:21 PM
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I suppose if I would just take the time to re-read this stuff that I might not miss spell so much.
posted by
UtahJay
on September 30, 2012 at 4:56 PM
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Bacon I miss spelled, but bye...I meant.
posted by
UtahJay
on September 30, 2012 at 4:54 PM
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wow an epic today...nothing wasted here .....well done dear friend.
posted by
Kabu
on September 30, 2012 at 4:39 PM
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Beautiful poem. The nostalgia comes rushing in.
posted by
calia14
on September 30, 2012 at 4:39 PM
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Your homework for today
Spelling: (time gone BYE) NO! (time gone BY) yes! Beacon (NO) BACON YES!
posted by
PoeticPoetry
on September 30, 2012 at 3:03 PM
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