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It can be rough to ghostwalk on the earth and have nothing real come of it. Great portrayal. 
posted by
mariss9
on September 28, 2012 at 9:42 AM
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A difficult position to find oneself is. I can just feel the heartache of the speaker.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 28, 2012 at 8:44 AM
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The last four lines are said with desperation. A wonderful, but very sad poem.
posted by
adnohr
on September 27, 2012 at 7:17 PM
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This is fantastic! I could relate to it totally! sam 
posted by
sam444
on September 27, 2012 at 6:59 PM
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posted by
Annicita
on September 27, 2012 at 6:52 PM
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Your poems are fantastic to read--so much is incorporated into each one.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 27, 2012 at 4:15 PM
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wondering what will be eventually....is it possible to have those thoughts
in an afterwards review? Well put together dear friend.
posted by
Kabu
on September 27, 2012 at 3:44 PM
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