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but on second thought...
your may not want your lines to sound out in a 'regular' iambic meter as Shakespeare did his, huh? I was just listening to a 'modern' poet, Rae Armantrout, who states she 'struggles' NOT to write in a 
rhythmic way.
posted by
PoeticPoetry
on September 26, 2012 at 9:06 AM
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editing your love, my love...
"you seek a gift so possible to own" (a pure, iambic pentameter, as opposed to the one you now have.) try if before you reject...
posted by
PoeticPoetry
on September 26, 2012 at 8:07 AM
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CCT
TWriting poems is a game. The prize is satisfaction of writing sir.BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on September 25, 2012 at 10:34 AM
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Re: Re Kabu
actually I gave up on Milking hedghogs the same year as I stopped milking Tigers!Medications taken.
posted by
Kabu
on September 25, 2012 at 10:33 AM
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Thank you CP.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 25, 2012 at 7:22 AM
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I cannot remember Jay but certainly not present.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 25, 2012 at 7:22 AM
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posted by
contagion_publishing
on September 24, 2012 at 11:40 PM
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This is one of your best CC. Tell me, are these reflecting of loves past and present?
posted by
UtahJay
on September 24, 2012 at 11:33 PM
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Re: Soft and warm perfection, CCT!
Yes thank you Ray. Never give all your secrets away, but why am I telling you this? 
posted by
C_C_T
on September 24, 2012 at 11:33 PM
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Thank you FS I find romantic poems suit better in poetry
posted by
C_C_T
on September 24, 2012 at 11:30 PM
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Thank you Taps it rained here all yesterday but a watery sun is rising and the leaves are still green.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 24, 2012 at 11:28 PM
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Thank you A . Yes it is nice to have that feeling
posted by
C_C_T
on September 24, 2012 at 11:25 PM
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Hi Sam nice to see you around
posted by
C_C_T
on September 24, 2012 at 11:24 PM
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Re Kabu
Well Kabu I try to wear gloves all we have left is blackberries thornless but I admit my hands do turn a bit purple tomatoes are bad for discolouration I don't like pulling ivy with bare hands or milking hedghogs.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 24, 2012 at 11:22 PM
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so Romantic, do you use a hand cream after being in the garden?
posted by
Kabu
on September 24, 2012 at 2:54 PM
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This line says it all: You seek a gift, it is not impossible to own. BRAVO! sam 
posted by
sam444
on September 24, 2012 at 1:59 PM
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lovely especially since this he ... she is positive 
posted by
Annicita
on September 24, 2012 at 11:51 AM
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I like your "He" and "She", and the flowers in their poetic conversations.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 24, 2012 at 11:12 AM
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I love reading these poetic dialogues.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 24, 2012 at 9:52 AM
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Soft and warm perfection, CCT!
posted by
Katray2
on September 24, 2012 at 7:25 AM
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