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Cheers Lion just trying to show it is not just writing
posted by
C_C_T
on September 24, 2012 at 7:12 AM
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Re: beautiful post all around sir
Feelings betray sometimes Bill
posted by
C_C_T
on September 24, 2012 at 7:11 AM
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Interesting poem, it felt almost stream of consciousness towards the end and I admire you for keeping it in style
posted by
lionreign
on September 24, 2012 at 4:10 AM
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beautiful post all around sir
posted by
BC-A
on September 24, 2012 at 2:37 AM
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Thankyou Marrise the roses surprisingnly take on a different colour.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 23, 2012 at 11:34 PM
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I suppose not Taps everything has a time limit
posted by
C_C_T
on September 23, 2012 at 11:31 PM
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Re:Pat
Perhaps you add eloquence where it is not perceived . Thank you for the idea.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 23, 2012 at 11:29 PM
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Re:Kabu
Yes very funny Kabu I must stick a fork in my foot that should be good for a laugh.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 23, 2012 at 11:26 PM
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Well I just let it run Jay
posted by
C_C_T
on September 23, 2012 at 11:21 PM
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This hits close to home.
posted by
UtahJay
on September 23, 2012 at 10:03 PM
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do the bees annoy you when you are out in the garden..perhaps there is one
called Archie!!
posted by
Kabu
on September 23, 2012 at 6:03 PM
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When I say your words aloud it is better, connects more strongly
than simply reading them silently. There's motion and emoting that comes clear in the words, even though they echo in this room a bit. Love the flower, too. :)
posted by
Pat_B
on September 23, 2012 at 12:19 PM
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There's nothing quite like a dying poem, unless it is a wilting flower.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 23, 2012 at 11:42 AM
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Quite taken by the Autumn like rose. The scenario sounded nice even though it may not have panned out for the kids. 
posted by
mariss9
on September 23, 2012 at 11:39 AM
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