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I also like the last stanza very much .
posted by
afzal50
on September 21, 2012 at 8:07 PM
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Katray2
You have always been special to me, like my sister, for your poetry and especially your poem in my 'Love and Sobriety. This poem reminds me of the pain you live and I say God Bless you my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 21, 2012 at 7:20 PM
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I really like the last stanza! KUDOS! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 21, 2012 at 1:44 PM
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posted by
Annicita
on September 21, 2012 at 1:42 PM
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Re: I cannot express myself better than this.
posted by
Kabu
on September 21, 2012 at 1:21 PM
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Quite sad really Ray , but how are they to know you fight a battle so bravely. We express with words but think with images I could read this again and again lovely.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 21, 2012 at 10:44 AM
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Such vivid imagery you have here in this poem...You have me wanting more.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 21, 2012 at 10:32 AM
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