Go to Life in the fast lane--where's the on ramp?
- Add a comment
- Go to Wiley John's Comment & a bit of behind the scenes
Re: where's the book?
Sorry, Adnohr. no signal device. Plus, which, this is from the revised version. There's been a couple characters added, one Black Hat and stupid, the other White Hat and interesting.
posted by
Pat_B
on September 21, 2012 at 8:34 AM
| link to this | reply
I'm still trying to find that book!! You gave the taste to read it again with your first post on this...it's in my enormous bookshelf...but where? My daughter shoved books in there willy-nilly when we moved the thing. You didn't happen in embed a signal device in it, did you? she asks hopefully...
posted by
adnohr
on September 21, 2012 at 5:35 AM
| link to this | reply
constructive criticism is a must for writers but it takes a really serious
and very adult writer who can accept with the dignity that you do.
posted by
Kabu
on September 20, 2012 at 1:23 PM
| link to this | reply
Pat
Write on! CCT mentions Dickens - he too wrote his books in bits and pieces, I wonder how he kept track...
posted by
Nautikos
on September 20, 2012 at 11:24 AM
| link to this | reply
I think Pat it is difficult in a concise exercise and not being able to read continuously to fix characters in the readers minds this is not your fault in this situation. One can still enjoy the drama and perhaps read through again when it is complete.Goodness and you put some work into this.
Books are different I think they should allow for each character to develop Dickens was a good example.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 20, 2012 at 10:02 AM
| link to this | reply
PatB
Blessings luv, thank you for understanding. and I shall look forward to seeing your 'update' now that I have a better grasp of the story.
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 20, 2012 at 8:07 AM
| link to this | reply
i thought it was just me...i think it was because too many characters were introduced at the same time....but it is intriguing and look forward to the next chapter
posted by
Annicita
on September 20, 2012 at 6:10 AM
| link to this | reply