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The ending makes me feel great inside...I like the way in which you arranged it.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 17, 2012 at 9:33 AM
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I adored the close, too! I believe love does indeed bend before it beaks! Well done! sam 
posted by
sam444
on September 16, 2012 at 10:22 PM
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Loved those last two lines
"As just before it breaks
Love bends."
Brilliant!
posted by
cpklapper
on September 16, 2012 at 6:48 PM
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Exquisite!
posted by
Reflecting_teddypoet
on September 16, 2012 at 4:06 PM
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wow...one of your best utah....kudos!
posted by
Annicita
on September 16, 2012 at 3:22 PM
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an excellent poem that touched my heart. I believe...forgive my unbelief.
and I just read what you said at my post and I am humbled dear friend. Thank you Thank you from deep within me.
posted by
Kabu
on September 16, 2012 at 2:57 PM
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Troosha is right - an excellent poem!
posted by
adnohr
on September 16, 2012 at 1:25 PM
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Bravo! A stunning piece of work!
posted by
Troosha
on September 16, 2012 at 12:22 PM
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