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Thanks all for the advice
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 16, 2012 at 9:38 PM
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Rejoices
To keep the rhyme
remove the "make"
or replace it with "then".
The "make" makes "every" into "all"
without the plural form of the modified noun.
"Then" is a subsequence suggesting causality
with "every" left as "each".
Makes every soul rejoice. ~ Makes all souls rejoice.
Then every soul rejoices. ~ Then each soul rejoices.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on September 16, 2012 at 7:00 PM
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no s on rejoice chuck....but what a wonderful thought
posted by
Annicita
on September 16, 2012 at 3:17 PM
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I like this a lot. Try it again in a week or so in the singular Chuck.
posted by
UtahJay
on September 16, 2012 at 2:32 PM
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it is like a smile.
posted by
Kabu
on September 16, 2012 at 11:33 AM
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It is contagious Chuck
posted by
C_C_T
on September 16, 2012 at 11:02 AM
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