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Knowing what I know, I am glad that you pulled through and continue to pull on through.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 13, 2012 at 9:58 AM
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Nice Jay keep writing if you feel like doing it one day you won't and you will look back and say I did that Cool man.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 13, 2012 at 7:11 AM
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Utah J
Yes you are a poet. I wish you so much success. 
posted by
Justi
on September 12, 2012 at 10:34 PM
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In your poem yes I can hear the pin drop 
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 12, 2012 at 10:23 PM
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"As We Please"
"As we please" says it all.
Short,sweet; reminds me regretfully of all the TIME I have wasted in my life.
posted by
PoeticPoetry
on September 12, 2012 at 6:51 PM
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Re: the first one, "As We Please" -oops -has a simple magic
for me - I really heard you in there! Somehow, for me, the second got too busy and
didn't have the same effect.
posted by
2902
on September 12, 2012 at 6:12 PM
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the first one, "As We Please"
posted by
2902
on September 12, 2012 at 6:08 PM
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very well described in your writing and I am proud to be reading your story
posted by
Kabu
on September 12, 2012 at 5:57 PM
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You are so fortunate that you made it through, and that you share it all so well. You are a great writer.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 12, 2012 at 3:52 PM
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wonderful job utah....can picture it dropping
posted by
Annicita
on September 12, 2012 at 3:27 PM
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