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Marie's friend
nice sweet memory ...great job!
posted by
Annicita
on September 11, 2012 at 9:15 PM
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it is such a healing project to write it all out for amongst the pain
one remembers there was beauty as well.
posted by
Kabu
on September 11, 2012 at 7:36 PM
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Such beautiful memories.
I love to read yours.
I love to write mine.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 11, 2012 at 3:28 PM
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There's nothing like those summer memories...It's great to read how it still looks the same. In my twenty-seven years, I have already seen a lot of things change.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 11, 2012 at 3:15 PM
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UtahJ
Thank you both for coming back and sharing this lovely poetry with us... Thanks for commenting on my blogs.
posted by
Justi
on September 11, 2012 at 2:36 PM
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The simplicity of nature . . . that always takes me back to childhood memories as well! 
posted by
JimmyA
on September 11, 2012 at 1:51 PM
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PS, I just caught up with your previous poem, Still Life" and
reveled in the rich imagery. You have some vivid memories but, even better, have the skill to describe them well.
posted by
2902
on September 11, 2012 at 1:19 PM
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You make your memories very real and precious for us - it
stokes us to call up similar stuff from our pasts. The details make it very vivid.
posted by
2902
on September 11, 2012 at 1:13 PM
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And now when more things are known, does Sixteen
see the dreams expand? Or is "not enough" still the bittersweet edge of the unexplored?
posted by
Pat_B
on September 11, 2012 at 12:54 PM
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