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The four poems complement each other 
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 10, 2012 at 1:46 PM
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Life truly is quite the journey. It's nice to get the feeling of hope while reading this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 10, 2012 at 10:40 AM
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PS For what it's worth, "mirrored waters" made me think of a desert
mirage.
posted by
2902
on September 10, 2012 at 9:01 AM
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Great! I don't know how any problems I've solved in my own life
just by imagining what X (someone I admired) would do!
posted by
2902
on September 10, 2012 at 8:59 AM
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Quite interesting Jay, you really love the language that spills from your imagination I am terrible at spelling, but I find over time one does quantify or qualify what one has written and of course when you can afford it pin the the Oxford English dictionary onto your computer and if you are not sure of a word look it up, believe me a lot of folk use words which may be coherent in their locality.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 10, 2012 at 8:08 AM
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Fascinating! Each reader must see something different, something from their own past, their own long trails of life.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 10, 2012 at 8:08 AM
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This is very good, it's so easy to empathise and identify with this one (who hasn't wanted wiser hands to fix things?) and I like the hopeful tone at the end
posted by
lionreign
on September 10, 2012 at 2:47 AM
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Following, thanks for pointing out my typo, its hard being dyslexic.
posted by
UtahJay
on September 9, 2012 at 9:04 PM
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did you mean fallowing or following?
very nice read 
posted by
Annicita
on September 9, 2012 at 9:00 PM
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